Egg Pysanky

11 years ago

Egg Pysanky
Egg Pysanky

I need grammar HELP? Should I put a comma after therefore?

Please help me correct this paragraph for any errors in grammar.

Ukrainian eggs (Pysanky) are very fragile therefore I will carefully pack your egg(s) to insure that it arrives safely at your door. I am more than happy to gift wrap anything free of charge. Please email me if you would like your item/s gift wrapped when you check out.

Please do not follow the recommendations of the other respondents. Place either a semicolon or a period before ‘therefore’ and place a comma after it.

A comma before ‘therefore’ creates a comma splice, as there are two independent clauses:

Eggs are fragile, and I will pack your eggs.

This is probably the best way:

Ukrainian eggs (Pysanky) are very fragile; therefore, I will carefully pack your egg(s) to insure that it arrives safely at your door.

Change it to ‘they’ and arrives to arrive:

“I will carefully pack your eggs to ensure that they arrive safely…

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